News Reading for Radio and TV
A Radio/TV news broadcaster/reader has
to use his/her on-air time effectively.
The principles of bulletin preparation
Radio bulletins are usually made up
from three types of material:
1. written
stories in the form of a script;
2. voice
reports from journalists, either recorded or live;
3. recorded
sound called actuality.
This is usually the
sound of someone speaking, perhaps taken from an interview or a speech. A short
segment of actuality is called a grab. Grabs are used in a similar way to
quotes in a newspaper story. In some countries, grabs are called cuts or
inserts.
Preparing a bulletin should not be
difficult if you remember the basic principles of news reporting. Remind
yourself of the criteria for what is news: Is it new, unusual, interesting,
significant and about people?
Each of these criteria will help
you to decide what stories you should include in your bulletin and where you
should place them within your five, 10 or 15 minutes. It is usual to give the
most important story first and the least important story last. If you are
putting together your first bulletin, stick to this technique.
However, once you feel confident
that you can put together a simple bulletin, you can start to consider some
extra factors which will change it from a list of stories to a proper bulletin.
The two main factors you have to
consider are the overall order or balance of the bulletin and the pace of it.
Balance
Try to avoid seeing the bulletin
simply as a collection of individual, self-contained stories. If you put a
string of economic stories (however important) at the start of the bulletin,
you risk losing your listeners' interest.
They expect a balance of items,
some heavy and some light, some about major political events and some about
ordinary people. Of course, the actual mix of stories, their tone and pace of
delivery will depend to a degree on the format of your station; serious
national broadcasters tend to use more serious stories, delivered in a more
deliberate style whereas youth-oriented music station bulletins might be
lighter and brighter with more stories about popular culture.
Whatever your station format, your
ranking of stories in order in the bulletin will give your listeners some
indication of how important you consider each story. But there is some freedom
within bulletins to re-order stories to add variety and balance to the bulletin
as a whole.
Pace
You must also get the right pace of
stories through your bulletin. By pace we mean the length and tone of a story
as it appears to the listeners.
Some stories have a fast pace. The
report of a fire, for example, will usually be written in short sentences,
using short snappy words to convey simple ideas. It will have a fast pace.
By comparison, a story explaining
some involved political controversy may need slightly longer sentences with
words expressing more complicated ideas. The story itself may need to be
slightly longer. The whole effect is one of a slower pace.
Too many long complicated stories
will slow the pace of the whole bulletin and allow the attention of your
listeners to wander. Too many short, sharp stories may leave listeners
confused, unable to keep up with the pace of changing stories.
Your ideal bulletin will have a
steady pace throughout to maintain interest, with variations in pace during
certain sections; slower at times to let your listeners catch their breath or
faster at other times to pick up their lagging interest.
How do you achieve balance and pace
in practice? You should rank your stories in order of importance then look at
the order afresh, to see that you have a good balance of items and variations
in pace.
You may decide that your most
important three stories are all rather serious political stories about
taxation, health insurance and an internal party squabble. Ask yourself:
"What will my listeners think of three minutes of this at the start of the
bulletin?" If you think they will be bored, what about putting the report
of a street fight up to the third place in the bulletin, to inject some pace
into that section? This may force your party argument story into fourth place,
but you will now be giving it new life by changing pace after the street fight
story.
Structuring the bulletin
Now you understand the basic
principles behind building a news bulletin, you can start thinking about how
the stories and components such as headlines and actuality can fit. Bulletins
are the broadcasting equivalent of a page on a newspaper, except that in radio
and television you are more limited in where you place the different parts
because, as we know, news bulletins are linear, therefore all the elements must
be placed along the line of time so they are used most effectively.
Starting the bulletin
The start is the most important
part of any radio bulletin. It determines whether or not your listeners will
stay tuned. Just as the intro is the most important part of a news story, the
lead item is the most important one in the bulletin. If your listeners find
this boring, they will assume that there is nothing better to come and go out
to dig the garden.
If you are faced with a choice
between two stories of equal strength for your bulletin lead, choose the story
which is more dramatic. If your obvious lead story is rather dull, you should
write it in such a way as to add life. Keep the sentences short, the ideas
clear and simple. Although you should try to write every story well, you should
give special attention to your lead story. This is the one by which listeners
will judge the bulletin.
Headlines
Once you have decided on the order
of stories, you should write some headlines for the bulletin. It is usual to
start a long bulletin by headlining the major stories. This may not be
necessary for a short, three-minute bulletin, but for longer bulletins your
listeners will want to know what kind of stories they can expect.
Your listeners will use the
headlines to judge whether or not the bulletin is worth listening to, so write
your headlines to promote the stories in the most powerful way possible.
It is good practice to headline the
first two or three most important stories, and also one or two dramatic stories
which come later in the bulletin. Many stations also like to headline the final
story, on the assumption that, if they make the headline attractive enough,
listeners will stay tuned to the entire bulletin until they hear that story.
You should write headlines for
dramatic stories in such a way that you hint at the drama without giving away
all the details. Remember that if you tell everything in the headlines,
listeners have no need to hear the rest of the bulletin.
In English bulletins, headlines do
not have to be grammatically complete. They can be more like newspaper
headlines, stripped down to the main words. The following are examples of
possible headlines:
"More trouble for the Asean
alliance."
"Twelve die in a mine
blast."
"Why Russia is angry with
Israel."
When writing headlines about
announcements or humorous stories, it is best to be mysterious, to keep the
real information secret until the listeners hear the story itself. Such
headlines are sometimes called teasers, because the tease the listeners'
interest.
For example, if you have a story
about rising petrol prices, you might write the headline "Motorists face
another shock at the petrol pumps". Never write the headline "Petrol
is to rise by 10 cents a litre" - that gives the whole story away, and
your listener can now tune to another station's bulletin or go and dig the
garden again.
Closing stories
Sometimes called tail-enders,
closing stories are almost as important as lead stories. They are the last
stories your listeners will hear and remember from the bulletin. You need to
choose them carefully. However, because many listeners do not maintain their
attention throughout the whole bulletin, you should not keep your best stories
to the end.
Light or funny stories make the
best tail-enders. They add relief and a change of pace to heavy bulletins. They
should be written in a more informal way than other stories, possibly with a
play on words which your listeners will appreciate.
It is usual in English radio
bulletins to signal the light tail-ender with the words "And
finally...", as in the following example:
And finally, police in Apia are
looking for a thief who broke into a house last night ... and left his trousers
behind.
Be careful, though. Humorous
stories may not be appropriate if the rest of the bulletin is dominated by a
major tragedy.
Closing headlines
With longer bulletins, you can use
closing headlines to remind your listeners of stories they may (or may not)
have heard 10 minutes earlier.
Again they should be the major stories
of the bulletin, excluding the tail-ender, which they should have just heard
anyway.
Unlike opening headlines, which
should attract your listeners to listen to the bulletin, closing headlines are
simply there as a service, especially to listeners who may have tuned in late.
Each closing headline should be a
summary of the main point of the story, written in one sentence. Any longer and
they become a repeat of the story itself. Do not simply repeat the opening
headline or intro of each story as a closing headline. This is laziness which
does not serve your listeners. Never repeat teasers as closing headlines: give
the details.
Closing headlines are usually
introduced with a phrase like: "Now to summarise the main stories,
..."
Actuality
Short grabs of actuality are a
useful part of news bulletins, for a number of reasons:
They can often tell the story more
effectively than a script. If your story is about a violent protest outside an
embassy, a 10-second grab of demonstrators chanting and shouting will convey
the atmosphere better than any words.
They can add variety to the pace of
the bulletin, breaking up a long section of reading by one voice. On the
practical side, they allow the newsreader to take a 30 or 40 second rest.
They are often a chance to let
people within your community speak on the radio. People like to hear their own
voice on radio occasionally, or the voices of people they know.
Using a grab of someone speaking
can convince listeners that the person really did say a certain thing. They
might not believe your report that the Government is resigning. When they hear
the Prime Minister announcing it, they have to believe.
Actuality grabs should be kept
short (between 20 and 40 seconds), clear and well-edited. A minute-long grab of
a dull voice will slow the pace of your bulletin and may force listeners to
switch off.
Grabs must be introduced, stating
clearly who will be speaking. You only need to identify a person after paying
the actuality (called back-announcing) if the grab is long and the voice is not
familiar.
Grabs in languages other than your
own should be overdubbed with a translation. This means that you fade down
(reduce) the sound of the original speaker until it can only just be heard,
then play the voice of the translator over it.
You can occasionally use grabs in
languages other than your own without overdubbing, but only if you know that
your listeners will be able to understand them. A short grab in simple language
may be usable without an overdub, especially when it is used to show the
emotion behind a speech, rather than the content.
It is occasionally possible to open
the bulletin with dramatic piece of actuality, then explain it with a
back-announcement. Such a grab must be dramatic, short and make sense to your
listeners. For example, a radio journalist used a 10-second grab of guns firing
and people screaming during the assassination of Egyptian President Anwar
Sadat, then back-announced: "The guns which destroyed the hopes of peace in
the Middle East as President Anwar Sadat of Egypt was assassinated."
Only use such opening grabs on
special occasions, otherwise they lose their effect. Also, it is not good to
play the grab before the opening theme, as it will confuse your listeners.
Music
Never use music as background to a
news bulletin. It is distracting and ruins any variations in pace within the
bulletin.
A special theme should be used to
announce the bulletin and may occasionally be used within the bulletin, perhaps
to separate different segments. We call such short music inserts stabs or
stings.
Your opening theme should be short
and dramatic. It should either end before the presenter starts reading or
should be faded out under their opening words. Many record companies now
produce selections of electronic or instrumental themes especially for use as
stabs.
Any stabs within the bulletin
should echo the opening theme as a link throughout the bulletin. However, too
many stabs will annoy the listener and reduce the amount of time available for
real news.
It is possible to use a closing
theme at the end of the bulletin, although this should be different from the
opening theme (you do not want to fool your listeners into thinking that this
is the start of the bulletin). The best compromise is to use the opening bars
of a theme at the start of the bulletin and use the closing bars at the end.
Timing your bulletin
There is never enough time on radio
for all the stories a journalist would like to include, so the timing of your
bulletin is very important. By careful timing you will be able to include all
your important stories, giving adequate details of each.
The exact time of each item depends
upon:
·
How long the whole bulletin is;
·
How many items you need to include;
·
How many grabs of actuality you want to use.
You have to balance these three
considerations. If your bulletin is 15 minutes long you can use up to 20
stories, several of them with grabs, and still treat each story properly. If
the bulletin is only five minutes, long you might not manage more than seven or
eight items and have time for only one or two short pieces of actuality.
Because some important stories can
be told briefly and some less important stories need lots of explanation, you
cannot set a fixed time for each story. However, if you aim to tell each story
in about 30 to 45 seconds, you will be able to cover the news properly and in
some detail.
If you have a number of less
important stories which you want to mention, run them as briefs at the end of
the bulletin. Briefs are short stories, no longer than one or two sentences
each. They are not designed to tell the whole news, simply to let people know
that something has happened.
The inclusion of briefs also helps
to increase the pace of the bulletin if the rest of the stories are long and
heavy.
If you are a newsreader too, you
must always read your bulletin through fully before going to air. Use this
opportunity to time each item, writing the time in the bottom right-hand
corner. Eventually you will be able to look at a piece of copy and estimate
within a second how long it will take to read. Initially, timing each item with
a watch will help you to develop the skill. Some modern newsroom computer
systems can automatically calculate the duration of a story based on the number
of words and the newsreader’s reading rate.
Below, in the section Reading rate,
we give some practical advice on how to calculate the length of your bulletin
and its components.
Always take more copy than you need
into the studio, just in case you have misjudged your timing or you have
problems with a piece of audio which does not play. The extra copy may be a
story which you would not normally consider important enough for the bulletin,
but which will provide a useful reserve in emergencies.
Keep glancing at the studio clock
as you read the bulletin so that you can make adjustments, adding or taking
away stories. And always be ready to use that extra story in an emergency.
In some cases, when your bulletin
comes before a current affairs segment, you will not need to run full details
of some stories in the news. You can say something like: "We will have
full details of this story in our current affairs program after this
bulletin."
Special bulletins
We have been speaking so far mainly
about regular news bulletins. There are, however, special bulletins which need
considering.
News flashes
A news flash is when the newsreader
breaks into a program on-air to read an important, urgent news story, such as a
major disaster or the death of a national leader. The news flash should only be
used on extremely important stories.
Urgent news which arrives in the
studio as the bulletin is going to air should be read at the next most suitable
break in the bulletin, although it usually makes sense to use it at the end of
the bulletin, just before any closing headlines.
The newsreader should have the
story as soon as possible, so that they can decide where in the bulletin to use
it. If you intended ending the bulletin with a light story and the flash comes
through of a major air crash, you must drop the light story.
It is possible to interrupt a
non-news program for a news flash, although you must warn people in the studio
that you are coming with the flash. The best method of introducing a flash is
for the program presenter to introduce the newsreader with words like:
"Now we interrupt the program to cross over to the newsdesk for some
urgent news."
The newsreader should then read the
story in their usual tone, speaking clearly and repeating details. If you only
have one sentence, you can read it twice to get the message across clearly. You
should end with words like: "Those are all the details available at the
moment. We will give full details in our next bulletin, at six o'clock."
Weekend bulletins
You may need to treat weekend news
bulletins in a slightly different way from weekday bulletins, because there are
usually fewer stories available.
You will need to re-assess
newsworthiness at weekends, perhaps running stories which you would not use at
other times. Your listeners will understand this. In fact, they may even
welcome a change from a diet of death, disaster and politics.
You may want to make your weekend
bulletins shorter and perhaps include a segment on sports news. You may want to
save lighter stories during the week to run at the weekend, as long as you
still cover the major events as well.
Practical techniques
There are many practical techniques
which will make the job of preparing news bulletins easier and more professional.
If you use these techniques, they will help you to overcome many of the
problems which inexperienced journalists can encounter.
Ranking stories
One of the major problems in
bulletin preparation is ranking the stories in correct order. Just follow some
simple steps.
First read through all the stories
available. Then go through them again, making three lists (or selecting the
stories on to three piles). These categories should be:
Important stories which you must
use;
·
Stories which you can use, but which are not so
important;
·
Stories which you cannot use, for any reason.
First look at the stories in
category one. Calculate roughly how much news these will give you (if each
story will be approximately 40 seconds long and you have four of them, they
will take about 2 minutes 40 seconds to read).
Now choose enough stories from
category two to more than fill the remaining time. Together with your essential
category one stories, decide the order in which you want to use them, taking
into account their importance, length and pace.
You can combine stories on similar
topics, either running them as one story or as two stories linked with words
such as "Meanwhile" or "Still on the subject of ...". A
word of caution. Do not combine too many stories, because they will become a
shapeless mass and you will lose the impact of separate intros.
Reading rate
It is very useful to know your
reading rate or the reading rate of the newsreader who will read the bulletin.
Once you know how long it will take you (or the newsreader) to read one line of
type, you can time your bulletin by counting lines, rather than by timing
yourself each time you practice.
Reading rates are calculated in
words per second (wps) and usually range from 2 wps for slower readers in some
languages to 3.5 wps for quite rapid readers in other languages.
Ask a colleague to help you
calculate your reading rate. Get them to time 60 seconds while you read a short
piece of news script. Mark where you stop after 60 seconds. Add up how many
words you read in 60 seconds and write this number down. Repeat this process
ten more times with different scripts. To calculate the average number of words
you read in 60 seconds, add up all the numbers from the ten scripts and divide
the total by ten. Divide this figure by 60 to get your reading rate in words
per second.
For example, you might find that
over 10 scripts, you read 125, 126, 119, 123, 118, 120, 122, 126, 118 and 117
words in 60 seconds. Add these up; they total 1214 words. Divide this by 10 to
get the average number of words per script (121). Now divide this average by 60
to get the number of words per second. The answer is roughly 2 words per second
- your average reading rate.
Once you know your average reading
rate, you can estimate how long it will take to read each story. Of course, you
will not want to count all the words in all your stories; this would take too
long. It is better to count just the number of lines.
First, count how many words there
are in 50 lines of your standard news scripts, then divide the total by 50.
This will give you the average number of words per line. For example, if there
are 600 words in 50 lines of script, the average is 12 words per line.
Now you can calculate how long it
takes you to read a line of script. For example, if your reading rate is 2
words per second and your script contains an average of 12 words per line, you
can read one line in 6 seconds (12 divided by 2). By counting the total number
of lines in each story, you can calculate quite accurately how long they will
take to read. For example, a story with 8 lines of type will take 48 seconds to
read (8 times 6). Mark the time on the bottom right-hand corner of each story.
One final step is to add up the
times for all your stories. This will tell you the total time it will take to
read them all. When you are adding up total reading time for the bulletin, add
an extra two seconds for the pause between each story.
(One tip on counting lines: If the
final line in the paragraph ends less than half way across the page, ignore it.
Count only those lines which end more than half way across the page. Over a number
of paragraphs, this will average out accurately.)
Of course, you may need a
calculator to work out all the sums, but it is worth the effort. Once you learn
how to calculate the length of your bulletins, you will be able to time them
accurately. After many years, you may become so experienced that you can judge
the length of a bulletin just by looking at it.
The script
Most newsrooms today use computers
to produce news stories and features which newsreaders can either print out or
read directly from a screen in the studio.
If your newsroom uses printed
scripts they must be typed neatly, with any last-minute changes clearly crossed
out. If you make more than a couple of crossings-out, re-print that script.
Start a new paragraph for each
sentence and type double-spaced. Type only one story per sheet, as this will
make it easier to find stories if you want to drop or insert them during the
bulletin. Use good quality paper which will not rustle as you move it.
Never turn a phrase from one line
to the next and certainly never hyphenate words from one line to the next.
Never staple the pages of your
bulletin together. You must be able to pull the sheets aside noiselessly as you
read them. Stack the stories neatly on one side after you have read them; do
not throw them on the floor.
Even if you read “off the screen”,
much of the above advice still holds though the challenge now is how to manage
the scrolling of the script and the re-arrangement of stories while you read.
As mentioned earlier, television newsreaders usually read from an autocue
operated by another member of the production staff. Radio newsreaders seldom
have such help so have to present their bulletins single-handed.
Whether you work in radio and television,
if your news stories and bulletins are well-prepared in an orderly manner, you
will make your work easier and serve your audience more effectively.
TO SUMMARISE:
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KISS - keep it short and simple
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Do not use quotes on radio or in television
scripts
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Avoid unfamiliar words
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Repeat important words
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Keep punctuation simple
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Simplify numbers
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Avoid abbreviations
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Show how to pronounce difficult words
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When constructing bulletins consider:
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balance
§
pace
Remember radio and television news
is presented in a linear way over time.
Consider how you will use different
elements and how they go together in sequence.
Time your bulletin precisely but
always have extra material in reserve
At least give credit to the page from where you have actually copied your whole write up.
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