Attribution of Sources
Attribution is stating who said something. Attribution is essential in
all the media, including radio and television. Journalists do it so that your
readers or listeners can know who is speaking or where the information in the
story comes from. You can use attribution for both spoken and written
information, so that you attribute information gathered from interviews,
speeches, reports, books, films or even other newspapers, radio or television
stations. In a moment we will discuss when you need to use attribution. First,
however, we will look briefly at how attribution works in reported speech.
Reported speech
In the previous chapter, we mainly
looked at attribution as it applied to quotes. However, attribution should be
used whenever you want your readers or listeners to know where your information
comes from. For example, in reported speech the attribution is still part of
the sentence, although it is not as distinct as when you use a direct quote. In
both of the following sentences, we attribute the words to Ms Mar. In the
first, her words are in quotes; in the second they are put into reported
speech. The attribution is in italics:
QUOTE:
Ms Mar said: "Students can expect no special treatment if they go on strike."
Ms Mar said: "Students can expect no special treatment if they go on strike."
REPORTED SPEECH:
Ms Mar said that students could expect no special treatment if they went on strike.
Ms Mar said that students could expect no special treatment if they went on strike.
Notice how, in the reported speech,
we had to change the verb "can" to "could" and the verb
"go" to "went". This is because, although quotes must be
word-for-word, reported speech is a report of something which was said in the
past, so the tenses have to be changed.
The use of the linking word
"that" is usually optional in reported speech. It is often left out
to reduce the length of the sentence, but should be included whenever it makes
the meaning of a sentence clearer. It is often used to separate the verb of
attribution from a following verb. Compare the two examples. Notice how
including "that" in the second example makes the meaning clearer:
The doctor felt many women worried about their health.
The doctor felt that many women worried about their
How often
should you use attribution?
The good journalist has to strike a
balance between the need to make clear attribution of statements and the risk
of boring the reader with too many phrases such as "he said".
It helps to change the word
"said" occasionally, in attributing both quotes and reported speech.
Some useful alternatives are "warned", "suggested",
"urged", "asked” and "disclosed". But beware: each of
these has a specific meaning. Check that it is the correct one for what your
speaker said and the way they said it.
The phrase "according to"
can be used in attributing reported speech, but do not use it more than once
with any single speaker. Although it is usually a neutral term, not suggesting
either belief or disbelief, if you use it too often it can give the impression
that you doubt the information the speaker has given.
There are other, more obvious
danger words to avoid. Words such as "stated" and "pointed
out" both imply that what the speaker said is an undisputed fact. You can,
for example, point out that the world is round, but you cannot point out that
this cake is delicious, because that is an opinion.
Also avoid the word "claimed",
which suggests that you do not believe what is being said. Be especially
careful when reporting court cases. Lawyers and the police like to use the word
"claimed" to throw doubt on opposition statements. You must not do
the same.
The exact balance of attribution
depends on the kind of story you are writing or the material you can use. If
the statements are reliably factual throughout, you only need to attribute
occasionally. If, however, the story is heavy with opinion or unreliable
statements, you should attribute at least once every two sentences.
Attributing facts and opinions
One of the greatest dangers facing
young journalist is accepting what people say as the truth. Just because
someone tells you that something is a fact does not make it so.
There are some things which are
universally accepted as true, for example that the world is round, that Tuesday
follows Monday, that Fiji is in the Pacific. But there are also things which
people want you to believe are true but which are either not provable or are
lies. These people may not knowingly tell a lie, but many people are careless
with the truth.
Also, situations may change, so
that the truth at one moment may be wrong the next. Attribution helps you to
overcome some of these problems. Attribution is the act of specifying who said
what.
If you attribute the words to the
person who said them, you do not have to prove or disprove the truth of their
words; you simply report them. Also, people judge what is said by the person
who says it. Statements made by people in authority carry more weight than
statements made by other people.
Look at the following example. The
attribution is the phrase said the vice-chancellor Ms Una Mar:
Striking students who miss exams will be given fail marks,
said the vice-chancellor Ms Una Mar.
In this case, you may have very
little doubt that this is exactly what will happen. But there is always the
chance that Ms Mar will change her mind and give the students a second chance.
By attributing the statement to Ms Mar, you protect yourself against this
possibility. Thus, if the students do get a second chance, you can say to your
critics: "We didn't say it, Ms Mar did."
In any case, your readers will be
interested to know what public figures believe to be true. Even if it is later
found that Ms Mar was mistaken, it is interesting to know that she once
believed she would fail the students. As soon as you find out she has changed
her mind, you can carry a news story saying so, recalling the previous story
attributed to Ms Mar.
Clear and
undisputed facts
In cases where there is undeniable
evidence that something is so, you obviously do not have to attribute facts. In
the following example, the weather was observable. Who is going to argue?
High winds and torrential rain lashed Port Moresby today,
bringing down trees and flooding parts of Waigani Drive.
Neither do you need to attribute if
you have witnessed the event yourself, for example while reporting from a
court:
The National Court sitting in Kieta has sentenced a man to
12 years imprisonment with hard labour for rape.
The court has found the man guilty
of rape. You saw the judge sentence him. You can state it as a fact.
There is another category of
stories which appear to be true because of the reliability of the sources.
These are statements made by people in authority who are in a position to know,
such as the police chief telling you about an arrest or the farm manager
talking about his cooperative. In such cases, you might not attribute the facts
in the intro, but your readers and listeners will still want to know how
reliable your information is. So you must attribute the facts further down the
story:
A gang of youths ran riot through Boroko shopping centre
yesterday, smashing car windscreens and shop windows.
Police said about 30 youths were involved and all are thought to be from Morata.
Police said about 30 youths were involved and all are thought to be from Morata.
or:
The Pago Farm Cooperative plans to double its rice
production to 200 tonnes next year.
Manager Mr Irwin Neman revealed the plans yesterday at a ceremony to mark the cooperative's second anniversary.
Manager Mr Irwin Neman revealed the plans yesterday at a ceremony to mark the cooperative's second anniversary.
In both cases, the sources are
reliable enough for the intros to stand on their own. Attributing the
information has added extra weight to them. Your readers or listeners can judge
how reliable the information is.
Opinions
There is no alternative to
attribution when statements made are opinions. If you do not attribute an
opinion to an individual, your audience will assume that it is your own opinion
- and there is no excuse for that kind of confusion in a news story.
Your problem may come in deciding
what is a verifiable fact and what is only opinion. In many cases this is easy:
Localisation in the public service has been rapid, but the
quality of work is still below expectations, according to Home Affairs Minister
Mr Barney Kina.
With a concept as vague as
"quality of work", this can only be an opinion, even expressed by a
senior minister. You will often find that opinions use vague and unspecific
language.
In cases where fact and opinion are
not easily separated, play safe and attribute the story.
Attributing a statement to someone
is no defence in a claim for defamation. If you wrongly accuse a person of
being a thief, it is no excuse to say that you were just quoting someone else.
Reliable
sources
In some cases, your sources of
information may not want to be named, for fear of revenge. Journalists who are
sure of their facts often attribute such information to "usually reliable
sources", "informed sources" or "sources within the
department/company".
In some cases, they use phrases
like "it is widely believed that" or "it is understood
that". Be warned! If your information is wrong, the blame will rest at
your door. The greatest danger comes in "off the record" interviews.
You must always consult your news editor or chief of staff about what you can
and cannot say in such cases.
TO SUMMARISE:
Quotes are an important
tool for print journalists, but they should never be used on radio, and only as
text on television.
Always attribute quotes to
the speaker or source of information.
You can use alternative
words to "said", but beware that they may have distinct meanings and
may imply support or disbelief.
Attribute all opinions and
information which is not a clear and undisputed fact.
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